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Magic Star of Dramatic Writing

DIALOGUE

On writing great dramatic dialogue; a compilation of guidance from classical and contemporary experts.


ARISTOTLE

Does the dialogue . .
  • indicate all character thought?



DAVID BALL

Does the dialogue . .
  • represent a character's effort to remove an obstacle to getting what he wants?
  • provide exposition only by having one character use information to propel another into action?
  • use "forwards" to increase the thirst for what is coming up?



JOSEPH CAMPBELL

Does the dialogue . .
  • show outward images and inward reflection?



LAJOS EGRI

Does the dialogue . .
  • grow from the character and the conflict, and, in turn, reveal the character and carry the action?
  • derive from characters permitted to grow dialectically until the slowly rising conflict has proved the premise?
  • show naturally and without strain, what has happened to the characters that is important to the action of the play?
  • build up as the story builds up?
  • convey the rhythm and meaning of each scene by sound as well as sense?
  • reveal character by telling what he is and hinting at what he will be?
  • reveal background and foreshadow upcoming events?
  • save words?
  • sacrifice "brilliance" for character?
  • make clever language part of the play?
  • stem from the character and not the author?
  • let the character speak in the language of his own world?
  • not break away from character and divert attention to itself?
  • avoid pedantry?



SYD FIELD

Does the dialogue . .
  • expose information without getting in the way of the characters and story?



BERNARD GREBANIER

Does the dialogue . .
  • contribute to dramatic incident?
  • avoid talk for the sake of talk?
  • maintain comprehensibility and interest?
  • match character?
  • link the beginning of one speech to the speech just ended?
  • allot the most important things being said to the opening and close of a speech?
  • convey only one important dramatic idea or ruling emotion in any speech?
  • never mirror a complete reversal in emotion inside a single speech?



RICHARD WALTER

Does the dialogue . .
  • move story and expand character?
  • economize words?
  • mimic natural speech rhythms?
  • have a beginning, middle, and end?
  • enter late and leave early?
  • avoid
    • reality
    • repetition
    • chitchat
    • dialect and
    • long speeches?

Do the characters . .
  • get to the point?
  • argue?
  • spit out exposition, get it over with, and move along?




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