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Magic Star of Dramatic Writing

CONCEPT

A compilation of guidance on creating good dramatic story concepts from classical and contemporary experts.


LAJOS EGRI

Is the premise . .
  • the conception or beginning of the story?
  • a single one only?
  • a thumbnail synopsis of the story?
  • easily worded so that anyone can understand it as the author intended it to be understood?
  • blended harmoniously into the whole such that it is impossible to separate it from the story or character?
  • provable by the story?

Does the premise include . .
  • character, conflict, and conclusion/resolution?
  • the author's conviction?




SYD FIELD

Does the story touch a . .
  • chord of truth within each of us?
  • universal truth that goes beyond culture, race, age, or geographic location?



BERNARD GREBANIER

Is the story derived from . .
  • a theme, which serves as the central governing idea?
  • a situation (or state of affairs) out of which the plot, the chief characters, and a theme evolve?
  • a certain character or group of characters?
  • the human interest stories in the daily newspaper?

Does the story . . .
  • imitate life's values, through selectivity and heightening, and not attempt to be a carbon copy of life?
  • hold a mirror up to nature and give a greater illusion of reality?
  • reach beyond the writer's own experience to include all that he has observed, all that he can remember of his dreams, all that he has heard tell about, and all that he has read?
  • call for more than two characters, unless some dramatic object is used with the catalytic force of a third personality?



MICHAEL HAUGE

Does the story concept possess . .
  • at least one hero, i.e., a main character, who is on screen most of the time, whose visible motivation drives the plot, and with whom the audience is deeply involved?
  • the likelihood of identification between the audience and the hero?
  • a clear, specific, visible motivation or objective which the hero hopes to achieve by the end of the story?
  • serious challenges, hurdles, and obstacles preventing the hero from pursuing his motivation?
  • the need for the hero to muster physical or emotional courage?

If an adaptation of a true story, novel, short story, or play, will it . .
  • be truer to the screenplay than to the original source?
  • consolidate or amplify certain characters and situations when it increases the emotional impact of the story and doesn't sacrifice the overall authenticity and spirit of the original event?
  • have a style, mood, texture, and structure all its own or will it suffer from the qualities of great literature, e.g., lots of interior thoughts, feelings, and descriptions; an expansive, convoluted plot; and an abundance of symbol and allegory?



RICK SCHMIDT

Is the story concept/idea . .
  • original?
  • interesting to an audience?
  • rich and complex such that it becomes more, not less, when seen again?
  • timeless?
  • likely to receive good critical response?

Is it the kind of story . . .
  • you would go see?
  • for which you'd like to be known?

Does the story concept/idea . . .
  • add meaning or understanding, in a personal or universal way?
  • have the possibility of human drama that will touch the audience's heart?

Will the . . .
  • idea continue to grow into a full-length story?
  • story concept quickly become outdated?



CHRISTOPHER VOGLER

Is the story a . .
  • metaphor, a model of some aspect of human behavior?
  • thought machine, by which we test out our ideas and feelings about some human quality and try to learn more about it?

Does the story . .
  • make you feel you've been through a satisfying, complete experience, that you've learned something about life or about yourself?
  • deal with the child-like universal questions:
    • who am I?
    • where did I come from?
    • where will I go when I die?
    • what is good and what is evil?
    • what must I do about it?
    • what will tomorrow be like?
    • where did yesterday go?
    • is there anybody else out there?



RICHARD WALTER

Does the theme . .
  • follow story and not precede it?

Is the story . .
  • compelling?


"Nobody wants to see a story about the Village of the Happy Nice People."
Richard Walter




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